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  • Aqua LetiferA Offline
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    Aqua Letifer
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    #109

    👏

    Please love yourself.

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    • George KG Offline
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      George K
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      #110

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      "Now look here, you Baltic gas passer... " - Mik, 6/14/08

      The saying, "Lite is just one damn thing after another," is a gross understatement. The damn things overlap.

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        Aqua LetiferA Offline
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        Aqua Letifer
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        #111

        @George-K said in The poetry thread:

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        Why did they choose Emily Dickinson I wonder? Lots of poets used that meter at the time, it was very common.

        And it came from music.The meter came from music. It's not a coincidence, there's a direct and intentional connection.

        Please love yourself.

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        • Doctor PhibesD Offline
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          Doctor Phibes
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          #112

          A favourite from my childhood...

          Matilda, Who Told Lies and Was Burned to Death (1907)

          Matilda told such Dreadful Lies,
          It made one Gasp and Stretch one's Eyes;

          Her Aunt, who, from her Earliest Youth,
          Had kept a Strict Regard for Truth,
          Attempted to Believe Matilda:
          The effort very nearly killed her,
          And would have done so, had not She
          Discovered this Infirmity.

          For once, towards the Close of Day,
          Matilda, growing tired of play,
          And finding she was left alone,
          Went tiptoe to the Telephone
          And summoned the Immediate Aid
          Of London's Noble Fire-Brigade.

          Within an hour the Gallant Band
          Were pouring in on every hand,
          From Putney, Hackney Downs, and Bow
          With Courage high and Hearts a-glow
          They galloped, roaring through the Town
          'Matilda's House is Burning Down!'
          Inspired by British Cheers and Loud
          Proceeding from the Frenzied Crowd,
          They ran their ladders through a score
          Of windows on the Ball Room Floor;
          And took Peculiar Pains to Souse
          The Pictures up and down the House,
          Until Matilda's Aunt succeeded
          In showing them they were not needed;
          And even then she had to pay
          To get the Men to go away!

          It happened that a few Weeks later
          Her Aunt was off to the Theatre
          To see that Interesting Play
          The Second Mrs Tanqueray.
          She had refused to take her Niece
          To hear this Entertaining Piece:
          A Deprivation Just and Wise
          To Punish her for Telling Lies.

          That Night a Fire did break out-
          You should have heard Matilda Shout!
          You should have heard her Scream and Bawl,
          And throw the window up and call
          To People passing in the Street-
          (The rapidly increasing Heat
          Encouraging her to obtain
          Their confidence)-but all in vain!
          For every time She shouted 'Fire!'
          They only answered 'Little Liar'!
          And therefore when her Aunt returned,
          Matilda, and the House, were Burned.

          I was only joking

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          • Doctor PhibesD Doctor Phibes

            A favourite from my childhood...

            Matilda, Who Told Lies and Was Burned to Death (1907)

            Matilda told such Dreadful Lies,
            It made one Gasp and Stretch one's Eyes;

            Her Aunt, who, from her Earliest Youth,
            Had kept a Strict Regard for Truth,
            Attempted to Believe Matilda:
            The effort very nearly killed her,
            And would have done so, had not She
            Discovered this Infirmity.

            For once, towards the Close of Day,
            Matilda, growing tired of play,
            And finding she was left alone,
            Went tiptoe to the Telephone
            And summoned the Immediate Aid
            Of London's Noble Fire-Brigade.

            Within an hour the Gallant Band
            Were pouring in on every hand,
            From Putney, Hackney Downs, and Bow
            With Courage high and Hearts a-glow
            They galloped, roaring through the Town
            'Matilda's House is Burning Down!'
            Inspired by British Cheers and Loud
            Proceeding from the Frenzied Crowd,
            They ran their ladders through a score
            Of windows on the Ball Room Floor;
            And took Peculiar Pains to Souse
            The Pictures up and down the House,
            Until Matilda's Aunt succeeded
            In showing them they were not needed;
            And even then she had to pay
            To get the Men to go away!

            It happened that a few Weeks later
            Her Aunt was off to the Theatre
            To see that Interesting Play
            The Second Mrs Tanqueray.
            She had refused to take her Niece
            To hear this Entertaining Piece:
            A Deprivation Just and Wise
            To Punish her for Telling Lies.

            That Night a Fire did break out-
            You should have heard Matilda Shout!
            You should have heard her Scream and Bawl,
            And throw the window up and call
            To People passing in the Street-
            (The rapidly increasing Heat
            Encouraging her to obtain
            Their confidence)-but all in vain!
            For every time She shouted 'Fire!'
            They only answered 'Little Liar'!
            And therefore when her Aunt returned,
            Matilda, and the House, were Burned.

            Aqua LetiferA Offline
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            Aqua Letifer
            wrote on last edited by
            #113

            @Doctor-Phibes said in The poetry thread:

            A favourite from my childhood...

            Matilda, Who Told Lies and Was Burned to Death (1907)

            Classic. Always loved that one, too.

            Please love yourself.

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            • MikM Offline
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              Mik
              wrote on last edited by
              #114

              There's a fairy tale for that y'know. The boy who cried wolf.

              But Matilda's is a better mental picture.

              “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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              • Aqua LetiferA Offline
                Aqua LetiferA Offline
                Aqua Letifer
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                #115

                Here's something that's interesting. This is from Lokasenna (Loki's Argument). Here's the original:

                Veit ek, ef fyr útan værak,
                svá sem fyr innan emk,
                Ægis höll of kominn,
                höfuð þitt bæra ek í hendi mér;
                lykak þér þat fyr lygi.

                Snjallr ertu Ă­ sessi,
                skal-at-tu svá gera,
                Bragi bekkskrautuðr;
                vega þú gakk, ef þú vreiðr séir;
                hyggsk vætr hvatr fyrir.

                Yes yes I know "what the fuck etc." Here's a translation:

                Bragi said:
                If we were outside, and you had not come inside Aegir's hall, I would be holding your severed head. I'd pay you back that way for all your lies.
                Loki said:
                You're brave while you're sitting. But you wouldn't do that, Bragi, the benchwarmer. Go ahead and strike me, if you're so angry. A brave man wouldn't be afraid to do it.

                "Benchwarmer" is an epithet that's about a thousand years old. Has a slightly different meaning now but that's how far back it goes. It's an old, old kenning.

                Please love yourself.

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                • MikM Offline
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                  Mik
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                  #116

                  Do tell..benchwarmer? I couldn't find anything over a couple googles..

                  “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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                  • MikM Mik

                    Do tell..benchwarmer? I couldn't find anything over a couple googles..

                    Aqua LetiferA Offline
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                    Aqua Letifer
                    wrote on last edited by
                    #117

                    @Mik said in The poetry thread:

                    Do tell..benchwarmer? I couldn't find anything over a couple googles..

                    Yeah, y'know, someone on the team who doesn't play in the games.

                    In this context, it means that you're on the boat for the raiding party (they'd bring benches with them on the longboats to double as a storage locker and a seat for rowing), but you don't get out to fight, you just sit there.

                    Please love yourself.

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                    • MikM Offline
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                      Mik
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                      #118

                      Makes sense, in a Viking sort of way.

                      “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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                      • MikM Offline
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                        Mik
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                        #119

                        Man, does this resonate today.

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                        “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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                        • Aqua LetiferA Offline
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                          Aqua Letifer
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                          #120

                          Yeats could certainly see what others couldn't.

                          Please love yourself.

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                          • HoraceH Offline
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                            Horace
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                            #121

                            Lions are orange.

                            Education is extremely important.

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                            • Aqua LetiferA Aqua Letifer

                              Yeats could certainly see what others couldn't.

                              MikM Offline
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                              Mik
                              wrote on last edited by
                              #122

                              @Aqua-Letifer said in The poetry thread:

                              Yeats could certainly see what others couldn't.

                              "The best lack all conviction
                              While the worst are full of passionate intensity"

                              “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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                                Horace
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                                #123

                                yeah that line hits with some resonance of truth.

                                Education is extremely important.

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                                • MikM Mik

                                  Man, does this resonate today.

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                                  Aqua LetiferA Offline
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                                  Aqua Letifer
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                                  #124

                                  @Mik said in The poetry thread:

                                  Man, does this resonate today.

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                                  I didn't realize—today's the old man's birthday!

                                  Please love yourself.

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                                  • MikM Offline
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                                    Mik
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                                    #125

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                                    “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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                                      Aqua Letifer
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                                      #126

                                      Yeah. Appropriate for the season and one of my favorites, @Mik .

                                      Please love yourself.

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                                        Aqua Letifer
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                                        #127

                                        This one's @Jolly 's fault. I read this story he posted:
                                        https://nypost.com/2024/10/27/us-news/west-va-boys-build-road-so-helene-victims-can-go-home/

                                        And then it occurred to me that America has no folk heroes anymore. Where are our John Henrys and Annie Oakleys? What happened to Paul Bunyan and Calamity Jane?

                                        So I figured I'd do my part to commemorate these guys. They're certainly deserving of a folk ballad.

                                        On 26 September,
                                        The winds and rain arrived.
                                        Helene, they learned, would have her way
                                        As every road was washed away;
                                        Against the storm, the swell and spray
                                        Few houses had survived.

                                        From Chimney Rock to Bat Cave,
                                        The storm had cut them off.
                                        They worried for their homes and wept;
                                        Some pleaded for support—except
                                        When governments are this inept,
                                        No plea is strong enough.

                                        But there were some who listened
                                        And knew, amid the noise,
                                        No bureaucrats or engineers
                                        Would haul the roads or bridges clear;
                                        That’s when the miners volunteered,
                                        The West Virginia Boys.

                                        They all arrived together
                                        And brought the locals in—
                                        They said like Noah’s flood it rained,
                                        But when at last the water drained,
                                        The mountain’s all that had remained
                                        Of where the roads had been.

                                        So could the Boys move mountains?
                                        They all had little doubt.
                                        “It’s difficult, but there are ways,”
                                        They said, “To get that mountain razed,
                                        Just give us all about three days—
                                        We’ll have a road punched out.”

                                        They got to work that morning
                                        And knew just where to blast.
                                        Within three days, a willing crew
                                        (And sure, a couple backhoes, too)
                                        Would do what no one else could do
                                        And brought them home at last.

                                        When DOT does nothing
                                        And FEMA sends a squad
                                        Of wonks who give you protocol
                                        And you’re ignored by city hall,
                                        Remember, you can always call
                                        The Boys of West-By-God!

                                        Please love yourself.

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                                        • MikM Offline
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                                          Mik
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                                          #128

                                          Look out, John Henry.. you got competition.

                                          Well done, Aqua.

                                          “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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