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  • MikM Away
    MikM Away
    Mik
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    #89

    Watching a Nat Geo show Vikings The Rise And Fall. This particular episode focuses on settling Iceland, and the poetry that came from there.

    “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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    • MikM Mik

      Watching a Nat Geo show Vikings The Rise And Fall. This particular episode focuses on settling Iceland, and the poetry that came from there.

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      Aqua Letifer
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      #90

      @Mik said in The poetry thread:

      Watching a Nat Geo show Vikings The Rise And Fall. This particular episode focuses on settling Iceland, and the poetry that came from there.

      Hell yeah, that's awesome.

      Those alliterative forms are what Anglo-Saxons used, too. It's the truest form of English poetry.

      Please love yourself.

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      • MikM Away
        MikM Away
        Mik
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        They were also the propagandists of their time.

        “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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        • MikM Mik

          They were also the propagandists of their time.

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          Aqua Letifer
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          #92

          @Mik said in The poetry thread:

          They were also the propagandists of their time.

          Yeah. They were their period's propagandists, news anchors, historians, musicians, actors and priests, all in one.

          Please love yourself.

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          • MikM Away
            MikM Away
            Mik
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            #93

            It’s a nice thought, isn’t it? Simple, direct and personal.

            “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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              #94

              Screenshot 2024-02-08 at 8.46.44 PM.png

              by Malcolm Guite

              Please love yourself.

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              • MikM Away
                MikM Away
                Mik
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                #95

                ❤️

                “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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                  Aqua Letifer
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                  #96

                  Another by Malcolm Guite. Very much enjoying his writing.

                  He's completed an Arthurian cycle he's hoping to publish in a year or so, and it's fantastic. This one is from his second book of poetry.

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                  Please love yourself.

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                  • Aqua LetiferA Aqua Letifer

                    Another by Malcolm Guite. Very much enjoying his writing.

                    He's completed an Arthurian cycle he's hoping to publish in a year or so, and it's fantastic. This one is from his second book of poetry.

                    screenshot_2024_02_14T13_07_29-0500.png

                    MikM Away
                    MikM Away
                    Mik
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                    #97

                    @Aqua-Letifer 👏

                    “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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                    • MikM Away
                      MikM Away
                      Mik
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                      By Michael Johnson

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                      “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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                        Aqua Letifer
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                        #99

                        False promises

                        Though clowns and blasphemers alike proclaim
                        Machines can hide the weakness of their words,
                        No heretic has ever cured the lame
                        And software can’t make diamonds out of turds.

                        —written by me, just now, because I felt like it.

                        Please love yourself.

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                        • MikM Away
                          MikM Away
                          Mik
                          wrote on last edited by
                          #100

                          Love it.

                          “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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                            @Aqua-Letifer , you are quite talented.

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                            • MikM Away
                              MikM Away
                              Mik
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                              #102

                              Death asked me to join him for dinner
                              so I slipped into my favorite black dress
                              that I had been saving for a special occasion
                              and let him walk me to our candlelit tryst.
                              He ordered a ribeye, extra rare
                              I ordered two desserts and red wine
                              and then I sipped
                              and wondered
                              why he looked so familiar
                              and smelled like earth and memory.
                              He felt like a place both faraway
                              and deep within my body
                              A place that whispers to me
                              on the crisp autumn breeze
                              along the liminal edges of dusk and dawn
                              somewhere between dancing
                              and stillness.
                              He looked at me
                              with the endless night sky in his eyes
                              and asked
                              ‘Did you live your life, my love?’
                              As I swirled my wine in its glass
                              I wondered If I understood the thread I wove into the greater fabric
                              If I loved in a way that was deep and freeing
                              If I let pain and grief carve me into something more grateful
                              If I made enough space to be in awe that flowers exist
                              and take the time to watch the honeybees
                              drink their sweet nectar
                              I wondered what the riddles of regret and longing
                              had taught me
                              and if I realized just how
                              beautiful and insignificant and monstrous and small we are
                              for the brief moment that we are here
                              before we all melt back down
                              into ancestors of the land.
                              Death watched me lick buttercream from my fingers
                              As he leaned in close and said
                              ‘My darling, it’s time.’
                              So I slipped my hand into his
                              as he slowly walked me home.
                              I took a deep breath as he leaned in close
                              for the long kiss goodnight
                              and I felt a soft laugh leave my lips
                              as his mouth met mine
                              because I never could resist a man
                              with the lust for my soul in his eyes
                              and a kiss that makes my heart stop.

                              ~ Gina Puorro: www.ginapuorro.com

                              Author's note: A playful love poem to Death, because I want to remember to relate to it as a part of life, and in ways that exist outside of violence and brutality.

                              “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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                                Aqua Letifer
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                                #103

                                @Mik Not really my thing but I applaud the effort and I like the idea. 👏

                                It's National Poetry Month and I don't care. Because for me every month is National Poetry Month. 😄

                                I started doing this thing. I had a different idea for buying the book, but, well, now I'm doing this.

                                Blackout poetry (sometimes called found poetry) is taking an existing text and hacking it up with a sharpie so that the extant words create a poem. Some folks go further by clipping out the words so they can be rearranged, but that's too far for me. I like the added constraint of working within the order the words were in originally.

                                Anyway, I bought a reprinted first edition of Alice in Wonderland and I'm making one long, continuous blackout poem with the book. I get through about a page a day.

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                                Please love yourself.

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                                • MikM Away
                                  MikM Away
                                  Mik
                                  wrote on last edited by
                                  #104

                                  That’s an interesting approach. I’ll perhaps take a crack at it.

                                  “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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                                  • MikM Mik

                                    That’s an interesting approach. I’ll perhaps take a crack at it.

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                                    Aqua Letifer
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                                    #105

                                    @Mik said in The poetry thread:

                                    That’s an interesting approach. I’ll perhaps take a crack at it.

                                    You should! It's fun and really accessible.

                                    The only trick to it is it's more of a listening exercise than a writing one. Gotta recognize what kind of things the text suggests to you.

                                    I find it's more successful the more fun you have with it.

                                    Those weird Life magazine special issues on Elvis's ghost and haunted cities make for great material. I actually buy the stuff in the checkout lane now.

                                    Please love yourself.

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                                      Not really a poem, but I came across this on iTunes for my drive to work, and thought it was wonderful...

                                      Link to video

                                      I was only joking

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                                        #107

                                        The night was dark, the moon was high
                                        We were alone, just she and I
                                        Her hair was soft, her eyes were blue
                                        I just knew what I had to do.
                                        I placed my hand upon her breast
                                        I did it well, I did my best
                                        I felt the thumping of my heart, as slowly her legs spread apart
                                        It’s over with, it’s done now
                                        My first experience, milking a cow.

                                        Only non-witches get due process.

                                        • Cotton Mather, Salem Massachusetts, 1692
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                                        • MikM Away
                                          MikM Away
                                          Mik
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                                          “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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