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  • Aqua LetiferA Offline
    Aqua LetiferA Offline
    Aqua Letifer
    wrote on last edited by
    #86

    One from Rabbie:

    My Heart's In The Highlands

    Farewell to the Highlands, farewell to the North,
    The birth-place of Valour, the country of Worth;
    Wherever I wander, wherever I rove,
    The hills of the Highlands for ever I love.
    My heart's in the Highlands, my heart is not here;
    My heart's in the Highlands a-chasing the deer;
    A-chasing the wild-deer, and following the roe,
    My heart's in the Highlands wherever I go.
    Farewell to the mountains high covered with snow;
    Farewell to the straths and green valleys below;
    Farewell to the forests and wild-hanging woods;
    Farewell to the torrents and loud-pouring floods.
    My heart's in the Highlands, my heart is not here;
    My heart's in the Highlands a-chasing the deer;
    A-chasing the wild-deer, and following the roe,
    My heart's in the Highlands wherever I go.

    Please love yourself.

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    • JollyJ Offline
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      Jolly
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      #87

      Old, but one of my favorites...

      The Sons of Mary seldom bother, for they have inherited that good part;
      But the Sons of Martha favour their Mother of the careful soul and the troubled heart.
      And because she lost her temper once, and because she was rude to the Lord her Guest,
      Her Sons must wait upon Mary’s Sons, world without end, reprieve, or rest.

      It is their care in all the ages to take the buffet and cushion the shock.
      It is their care that the gear engages; it is their care that the switches lock.
      It is their care that the wheels run truly; it is their care to embark and entrain,
      Tally, transport, and deliver duly the Sons of Mary by land and main.

      They say to mountains, ” Be ye removèd” They say to the lesser floods ” Be dry.”
      Under their rods are the rocks reprovèd – they are not afraid of that which is high.
      Then do the hill tops shake to the summit – then is the bed of the deep laid bare,
      That the Sons of Mary may overcome it, pleasantly sleeping and unaware.

      They finger death at their gloves’ end where they piece and repiece the living wires.
      He rears against the gates they tend: they feed him hungry behind their fires.
      Early at dawn, ere men see clear, they stumble into his terrible stall,
      And hale him forth like a haltered steer, and goad and turn him till evenfall.

      To these from birth is Belief forbidden; from these till death is Relief afar.
      They are concerned with matters hidden – under the earthline their altars are
      The secret fountains to follow up, waters withdrawn to restore to the mouth,
      And gather the floods as in a cup, and pour them again at a city’s drouth.

      They do not preach that their God will rouse them a little before the nuts work loose.
      They do not teach that His Pity allows them to leave their job when they damn-well choose.
      As in the thronged and the lighted ways, so in the dark and the desert they stand,
      Wary and watchful all their days that their brethren’s days may be long in the land.

      Raise ye the stone or cleave the wood to make a path more fair or flat;
      Lo, it is black already with blood some Son of Martha spilled for that !
      Not as a ladder from earth to Heaven, not as a witness to any creed,
      But simple service simply given to his own kind in their common need.

      And the Sons of Mary smile and are blessèd – they know the angels are on their side.
      They know in them is the Grace confessèd, and for them are the Mercies multiplied.
      They sit at the Feet – they hear the Word – they see how truly the Promise runs.
      They have cast their burden upon the Lord, and – the Lord He lays it on Martha’s Sons !

      “Cry havoc and let slip the DOGE of war!”

      Those who cheered as J-6 American prisoners were locked in solitary for 18 months without trial, now suddenly fight tooth and nail for foreign terrorists’ "due process". — Buck Sexton

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      • Aqua LetiferA Offline
        Aqua LetiferA Offline
        Aqua Letifer
        wrote on last edited by
        #88

        Kipling. Of course. 😄

        But yes it is excellent.

        Please love yourself.

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        • MikM Offline
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          Mik
          wrote on last edited by
          #89

          Watching a Nat Geo show Vikings The Rise And Fall. This particular episode focuses on settling Iceland, and the poetry that came from there.

          “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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          • MikM Mik

            Watching a Nat Geo show Vikings The Rise And Fall. This particular episode focuses on settling Iceland, and the poetry that came from there.

            Aqua LetiferA Offline
            Aqua LetiferA Offline
            Aqua Letifer
            wrote on last edited by
            #90

            @Mik said in The poetry thread:

            Watching a Nat Geo show Vikings The Rise And Fall. This particular episode focuses on settling Iceland, and the poetry that came from there.

            Hell yeah, that's awesome.

            Those alliterative forms are what Anglo-Saxons used, too. It's the truest form of English poetry.

            Please love yourself.

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            • MikM Offline
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              Mik
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              #91

              They were also the propagandists of their time.

              “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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              • MikM Mik

                They were also the propagandists of their time.

                Aqua LetiferA Offline
                Aqua LetiferA Offline
                Aqua Letifer
                wrote on last edited by
                #92

                @Mik said in The poetry thread:

                They were also the propagandists of their time.

                Yeah. They were their period's propagandists, news anchors, historians, musicians, actors and priests, all in one.

                Please love yourself.

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                • MikM Offline
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                  Mik
                  wrote on last edited by
                  #93

                  It’s a nice thought, isn’t it? Simple, direct and personal.

                  “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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                  • Aqua LetiferA Offline
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                    Aqua Letifer
                    wrote on last edited by
                    #94

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                    by Malcolm Guite

                    Please love yourself.

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                    • MikM Offline
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                      Mik
                      wrote on last edited by
                      #95

                      ❤️

                      “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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                      • Aqua LetiferA Offline
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                        Aqua Letifer
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                        #96

                        Another by Malcolm Guite. Very much enjoying his writing.

                        He's completed an Arthurian cycle he's hoping to publish in a year or so, and it's fantastic. This one is from his second book of poetry.

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                        Please love yourself.

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                        • Aqua LetiferA Aqua Letifer

                          Another by Malcolm Guite. Very much enjoying his writing.

                          He's completed an Arthurian cycle he's hoping to publish in a year or so, and it's fantastic. This one is from his second book of poetry.

                          screenshot_2024_02_14T13_07_29-0500.png

                          MikM Offline
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                          Mik
                          wrote on last edited by
                          #97

                          @Aqua-Letifer 👏

                          “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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                          • MikM Offline
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                            Mik
                            wrote on last edited by
                            #98

                            By Michael Johnson

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                            “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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                            • Aqua LetiferA Offline
                              Aqua LetiferA Offline
                              Aqua Letifer
                              wrote on last edited by Aqua Letifer
                              #99

                              False promises

                              Though clowns and blasphemers alike proclaim
                              Machines can hide the weakness of their words,
                              No heretic has ever cured the lame
                              And software can’t make diamonds out of turds.

                              —written by me, just now, because I felt like it.

                              Please love yourself.

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                              • MikM Offline
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                                Mik
                                wrote on last edited by
                                #100

                                Love it.

                                “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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                                  taiwan_girl
                                  wrote on last edited by
                                  #101

                                  @Aqua-Letifer , you are quite talented.

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                                  • MikM Offline
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                                    Mik
                                    wrote on last edited by
                                    #102

                                    Death asked me to join him for dinner
                                    so I slipped into my favorite black dress
                                    that I had been saving for a special occasion
                                    and let him walk me to our candlelit tryst.
                                    He ordered a ribeye, extra rare
                                    I ordered two desserts and red wine
                                    and then I sipped
                                    and wondered
                                    why he looked so familiar
                                    and smelled like earth and memory.
                                    He felt like a place both faraway
                                    and deep within my body
                                    A place that whispers to me
                                    on the crisp autumn breeze
                                    along the liminal edges of dusk and dawn
                                    somewhere between dancing
                                    and stillness.
                                    He looked at me
                                    with the endless night sky in his eyes
                                    and asked
                                    ‘Did you live your life, my love?’
                                    As I swirled my wine in its glass
                                    I wondered If I understood the thread I wove into the greater fabric
                                    If I loved in a way that was deep and freeing
                                    If I let pain and grief carve me into something more grateful
                                    If I made enough space to be in awe that flowers exist
                                    and take the time to watch the honeybees
                                    drink their sweet nectar
                                    I wondered what the riddles of regret and longing
                                    had taught me
                                    and if I realized just how
                                    beautiful and insignificant and monstrous and small we are
                                    for the brief moment that we are here
                                    before we all melt back down
                                    into ancestors of the land.
                                    Death watched me lick buttercream from my fingers
                                    As he leaned in close and said
                                    ‘My darling, it’s time.’
                                    So I slipped my hand into his
                                    as he slowly walked me home.
                                    I took a deep breath as he leaned in close
                                    for the long kiss goodnight
                                    and I felt a soft laugh leave my lips
                                    as his mouth met mine
                                    because I never could resist a man
                                    with the lust for my soul in his eyes
                                    and a kiss that makes my heart stop.

                                    ~ Gina Puorro: www.ginapuorro.com

                                    Author's note: A playful love poem to Death, because I want to remember to relate to it as a part of life, and in ways that exist outside of violence and brutality.

                                    “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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                                    • Aqua LetiferA Offline
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                                      Aqua Letifer
                                      wrote on last edited by Aqua Letifer
                                      #103

                                      @Mik Not really my thing but I applaud the effort and I like the idea. 👏

                                      It's National Poetry Month and I don't care. Because for me every month is National Poetry Month. 😄

                                      I started doing this thing. I had a different idea for buying the book, but, well, now I'm doing this.

                                      Blackout poetry (sometimes called found poetry) is taking an existing text and hacking it up with a sharpie so that the extant words create a poem. Some folks go further by clipping out the words so they can be rearranged, but that's too far for me. I like the added constraint of working within the order the words were in originally.

                                      Anyway, I bought a reprinted first edition of Alice in Wonderland and I'm making one long, continuous blackout poem with the book. I get through about a page a day.

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                                      Please love yourself.

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                                      • MikM Offline
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                                        Mik
                                        wrote on last edited by
                                        #104

                                        That’s an interesting approach. I’ll perhaps take a crack at it.

                                        “I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals.” ~Winston S. Churchill

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                                        • MikM Mik

                                          That’s an interesting approach. I’ll perhaps take a crack at it.

                                          Aqua LetiferA Offline
                                          Aqua LetiferA Offline
                                          Aqua Letifer
                                          wrote on last edited by
                                          #105

                                          @Mik said in The poetry thread:

                                          That’s an interesting approach. I’ll perhaps take a crack at it.

                                          You should! It's fun and really accessible.

                                          The only trick to it is it's more of a listening exercise than a writing one. Gotta recognize what kind of things the text suggests to you.

                                          I find it's more successful the more fun you have with it.

                                          Those weird Life magazine special issues on Elvis's ghost and haunted cities make for great material. I actually buy the stuff in the checkout lane now.

                                          Please love yourself.

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